Thread:Space-Lover999/@comment-45218397-20200612002756

um...

your pages The Great Chunk and Dark Ring aren't that good. Firstly, you should work on your grammar and make some parts more specific, such as when you just said "millions of matter". You should at least specify a unit, such as tons or kilograms.

One more thing is to make your numbers less arbitrary. Writing 10^10^10... over and over again doesn't make your article nice to look at. It's best to make it shorter, and write a shorter amount, or do something like 10^10 (100 times).

Hope this helped! 